The longest week ever..

We used the contructive critisism from the group last week to make our project come together as quickly and efficiently as possible. We met up everyday for the past week to bang our heads together on how to make it as sucessful as possible. We had the beginning sequence, which included the close up and long shot of the text, followed by the clip from the optician who briefly described the sequence of Laser eye surgery for us beofore we went into describing it ourselves. For this we used a vice-over from myslef. One thing I would change about the progression of our work towards this would be to plan it out a bit more. Because of finalising scripts and going through what I had to say It took up some of our recording times. However we did manage to get it finished eventually and the voiceovers worked pretty well. We then went through Eleanors interview with a cut in the middle of her with her child, watching the rough cut showed us that the was excess footage on there about Eleanor that we didnt really need. So we used more information and voiceovers to go over it, as well as the ever important slice of cheese at the end.. even so, the song worked extremelly well with the end credits..